In many countries, the legal driving age is 18 years old. Some people believe that it is the right age to learn how to drive a car, whereas others say that the minimum age should be 25. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Driving is an essential skill that everyone needs to learn at certain age. Few of the individuals support that 18 is the best age to learn to drive a car whereas few declines and claims it to be 25. This essay will discuss both the views along with my opinion.
To start with, at the age of 18, people are fascinated of speed. Hence, once they learn to drive, they will start pushing the speed limit to flaunt in front of their friends, which is dangerous for the society. For example, one survey which was carried by the Cambridge University suggests that 1.8 billion people dies every year merely because of over speeding. On top of that, at this age, everyone has to travel from their place to the other to get higher education. For instance, in India, to get the graduation one has to travel far away from their city to a different location as good colleges are in metro cities only. For this reason, India has set 18 as the minimum age limit to start learning a car.
On contrary, at the age of 25 the maturity level of an individual is different. They tend to be more responsible towards the society. One survey suggests that as person grows up their maturity grows too. However, if a person does people do not start to learn to drive a vehicle at certain age, it can be very difficult for them afterwards. For instance, driving is a skill that requires courage and if after a certain age the person does not start to learn to drive, it may generate fear of learning and driving, which in turn is a foolish act.
In conclusion, I opine that, for the growth of an individual, the best age to learn to drive a car is 18. Through strict laws and rules along with good driving schools, safe driving standards can be nurtured in individual and at 18 the person is mature enough to understand this responsibility.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to start with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48048048048 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44334481763 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501501501502 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.443947273 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.25 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332224945165 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123714357364 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807565046674 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235881328666 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704439135749 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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