Young people are now spending more and more time and money following fashion trends. What is your opinion? Is this a positive or negative development?
Fashion overspending has captured significant public attention due to its implication on youngsters in recent years. Although the downsides could be pronounced, I subscribe to the opinion that this pattern is a positive development.
Opponents of spending an excessive amount of time and money on fashion cite several reasons for their worries. First, this tendency could lay a foundation for a throw-away society where young generations only wear certain garments for a short time. As a consequence, this kind of consumer behavior would encourage overproduction and overconsumption, spelling disaster for the environment on huge amounts of waste. Second, due to the fact that the latest styles of clothes are associated with expensive price tags by the time they are first released, it exerts negative impacts on financial stability. Because when they squander their money to keep up with the latest trend, they might encounter short-term financial problems, such as monthly bills and debts.
However, I would agree that embracing the pursuit of fashion trends could exert an array of benefits when it comes to occupations. Initially, if young job seekers want to apply for a fashion-related job such as a model or fashion designer, keeping up with the latest fashion trend could be a competitive edge over others. An explanation is that if young candidates wear the up-to-the-minute style of fashion, they are able to show their aesthetic taste, thus leaving an impression on employers. Moreover, this trend could pave a way for more occupational opportunities such as becoming trend influencers. For instance, Chau Bui who is an influencer of fashion in VN is famous for mixing and matching to become dressed to kill. As a result, she has received lucrative contracts of clothing advertisement from manifold businesses.
In conclusion, I believe that excessive investment in fashion for fashionable trends of clothes could have both advantages and disadvantages. Nevertheless, I show my preference for the upsides because of its desirable impacts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42367601246 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19053916808 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607476635514 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9792762271 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.066666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20832226365 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672704747133 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479213031929 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115540824817 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320980703815 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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