Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down.other however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.
Although few individuals hold view that the zoos has a great role in preserving the endanger wild life, other believe they zoos should be shut down because of its cruelty. In my opinion, zoo is a vital component of awareness and protecting the wild life but we can not neglect it's limitation.
On the one hand, the main factor because of which zoos are considered unethical is animals are kept in cage instead of natural environment. In other words, the lifestyle gets affected due to change in surrounding environment such as cage and also people who come for seeing them sometime harass the animals. To exemplify, there are many survey has been done which says that the animals in zoos, their lifestyle are greatly disrupted. Therefore, the zoos can be considered as brutal.
On the other hand, the two prominent reason why the zoo increasingly helpful to wild life. Firstly, endanger species, the animals that are about to die out can be preserve in zoo and help them to rise their population. For instance, the tiger population is rose because of zoo's significant efforts. Secondly, the awareness about the animals so that people will understand the pivotal role of animals in our life and encourage them in protecting the wild animals. Thus, the zoo had been preserving the species which are at the risk of extinction.
In recapitulation, eventhough the zoos are brutal to some extend, I think they have noteworthy part in saving wild animals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...the zoos has a great role in preserving the endanger wild life, other believe they zoos shou...
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Suggestion:
... In my opinion, zoo is a vital component of awareness and protecting the wild lif...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun survey seems to be countable; consider using: 'many surveys'.
Suggestion: many surveys
...ss the animals. To exemplify, there are many survey has been done which says that the anima...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'surveys'?
Suggestion: surveys
...e animals. To exemplify, there are many survey has been done which says that the anima...
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...tion. For instance, the tiger population is rose because of zoos significant effo...
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...n protecting the wild animals. Thus, the zoo had been preserving the species whic...
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Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i think, in fact, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94308943089 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71426633203 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565040650407 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6926990921 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402462868078 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141703346783 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824887566479 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23459975021 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686844701121 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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