Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as: food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Children are considered to be the nation’s builder. But nowadays, society has been polarised into two distinct groups almost equally regarding children’s boundary in making decisions about their daily matters. whereas others avert it. Both the points have their arguments for and against them, however, I tend to believe that children should be guided to make decisions for regular utensils like foods, clothes and entertainment.
To commence with the first notion, guidelines in making decisions for necessary objects would be helpful for them to distinguish between right and wrong. Generally, for food, children prefer much that looks appetizing but have less food values, which could be deleterious for their health and result in obesity. For clothes and entertainments it’s possible for them to adopt some uncultured that might provide disastrous impact on society and mostly family lives. Moreover, if a child chose his or her own way of entertainment, it could detach the child from the society. For instance, as times go on they will not participate on the welfare of the society. Recent reports suggested that child, who prefer their own mind-set are not come forward to the society in need.
Shifting towards the second school of thought, decision making could be beneficial for mental development. Children would be more creative if they choose their own regular activities. Not only that but also maturity among children would gained early and strength them to confront with adversity of lives. As for example, Children bring up in a nuclear family often provide important decision early in life as they choose their own way of daily lives.
After hashing out both the point of views it can be concluded that, freedom of children might develop creativity but in the long run it will detach them from society and will not develop the sense of duty towards the nation and the society. Therefore, it is necessary to bound them by some rules.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
...ng decisions about their daily matters. whereas others avert it. Both the points have t...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ng decisions about their daily matters. whereas others avert it. Both the points have t...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'gain'
Suggestion: gain
... but also maturity among children would gained early and strength them to confront wit...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, second, so, therefore, whereas, as for, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15047021944 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58945554487 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573667711599 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2481278479 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.6875 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220090519837 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730185417269 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510218196651 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131347615426 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564406054653 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
...ng decisions about their daily matters. whereas others avert it. Both the points have t...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ng decisions about their daily matters. whereas others avert it. Both the points have t...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'gain'
Suggestion: gain
... but also maturity among children would gained early and strength them to confront wit...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, second, so, therefore, whereas, as for, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15047021944 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58945554487 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573667711599 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2481278479 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.6875 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220090519837 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730185417269 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510218196651 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131347615426 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564406054653 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.