People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What can be done to make people drink less?
Soft drinks are gaining in popularity and there has been an increase in the number of people consuming these content products. There are an awful lot of reasons for this problem, ranging from the feelings of pleasure to providing energy for people, and some feasible remedies to reduce their consumption of sugar-based drinks.
First of all, people tend to consume more sugary drinks due to the proportion of stimulus accompanied by those ones. They make individuals pleased and cheerful, thus being addicted to them. Besides, soft drinks have a temporary effect, which helps in dispelling our thirst and is really useful to provide calories, especially people who have low blood pressure, sugar-contained products are the ideal choices for them. Furthermore, owing to the ubiquity of sugar-based drinks, people can usually come across them on every single road to their workplace, schools, etc, thus tempting us and encouraging us to buy them.
To address this phenomenon, education is on the top of recommendations. People should be made aware of the negative impacts of soft drinks, which gradually wear away our health and lead to some health problems like obesity and diabetes. Instead of drinking unhealthy drinks, they had better replace them with freshwater, which is both good and integral in facilitating humans' metabolism. What's more, the government needs to introduce some legislation to reduce the sales of soft drinks like enforcing heavy taxes on companies producing quantitative sugar-based products as well as subsidies for some firms selling healthy and fresh fruit juice.
In conclusion, the increase of sugary drinks results from both individuals per se besides their environment, and practical solutions for this problem require the involvement of the government and its citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'those' instead.
Suggestion: those
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, really, so, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42907801418 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86604028446 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627659574468 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.723332263 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.181818182 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29819582876 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952594880356 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575023895529 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152583537164 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784065732931 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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