Some people think that public health is the responsibility of the government while others think that people should be responsible for their own health. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this day and age, public health has been one of the most burning concerns and controversial topics that draws people’s attention across many countries around the world. While it is believed that the government is the only one whose responsibility for inhabitant's health has to be taken, I am an advocate lean on the idea that individuals should be health-conscious and responsible for their health.
Turning to the government’s responsibility side, the first and foremost reason for this idea is that the government is the one having the strongest power in a country, which is required for plenty of social health-related affairs. Covid vaccines might be the most popular example, especially in this pandemic. Due to its high cost and rarity, it is obvious that the government has to regulate the imports as well as injections of such vaccines though there are many billionaires who can afford such vaccine’s cost. Another example is that the government can impose the high tax on products that contain high levels of sugar, which can cause many health problems such as diabetes or obesity.
In contrast, there are many compelling reasons for individuals to take responsibility for their own health. Firstly, according to those who are not health-conscious and have lots of unhealthy habits such as smoking, overdrinking alcohol or other unbalance lifestyles, they are set to risk themselves from many serious health problems such as insomnia or lungs cancer. In other words, it is their duty rather than the government to keep themselves healthy. In addition, there are many other more serious social problems that require attention from the government. For instance, the increasing unemployment and illiteracy rates or the emergence of more crimes.
In conclusion, I completely agree that public health should be the duty of each inhabitant as the government has to tackle other more serious social issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24350649351 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0282358054 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525974025974 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.7254179804 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.583333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318474654923 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116728081672 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100049298193 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20908514562 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847824277033 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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