Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Online shopping has increased in popularity is the last few years. With the advance of technology, the practice of purchasing goods online are common in modern society. While some argue that it has drawbacks, i am firmly convinced that there are more benefits associated with it.
On one hand, shopping on the internet is detrimental in certain aspects. First and foremost, personal information is required before any purchase, thus it would be unpleasant if those information is stolen or leak. For example, hackers could gain access into customer's shopping account, then they would illegally spend their victims money by buying goods. In addition, customers could be scammed by commercials which exaggerate the function of a product. Since buyer are incapable of trying the product in person, it would be difficult to find a quality product online.
On the other hand, the benefits that this form of purchase brings are more significant. One obvious advantage is it is much more convenient than the traditional way of shopping, people could buy almost anything they want at home with simple steps and it would be at their door in a matter of days, especially with those who are busy. Moreover, instead of traveling around the town to find what you want, customers could find all sort of products from all the brands over the world which may not be available in nearby stores. When someone reach a purchase goal, they get discounts and sale which save them a lot of money.
In sum, although there are disadvantage associated with the practice of buying online products, the advantages that it provides is weightier. It is predicted that this form of shopping would remained everyone's favorite by years to come.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...While some argue that it has drawbacks, i am firmly convinced that there are more...
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Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'those informations'?
Suggestion: this information; those informations
...urchase, thus it would be unpleasant if those information is stolen or leak. For example, hackers...
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Line 5, column 540, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'reaches'.
Suggestion: reaches
...vailable in nearby stores. When someone reach a purchase goal, they get discounts and...
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Line 7, column 192, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'remain'
Suggestion: remain
...dicted that this form of shopping would remained everyones favorite by years to come.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, while, for example, in addition, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03859649123 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65104844617 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60701754386 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.692710177 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.571428571 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145675854646 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050831989425 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046928587772 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090896409802 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303887777367 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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