Essay topics:
In the modern world, many employees lack soft skills such as communication and working in teams.
What are the main causes of this problem? What are the effects of the lack of such skills?
Submitted by Patel Romaa on Thu, 07/29/2021 - 08:57
irrefutably, in this modern era, the youth generation mostly spend time with their social media and they are immensely introverted also they are not easily communicating with each other and they do not interest to working in teams they prefer to do work individually. There are a plethora of causes of this problem and drawbacks related to this lack of skills.
To begin with, there are a lot of predominant causes related to introverted people why they are behaving like this. first and foremost cause pressure work on their shoulder so they are busy with their work side and they are always preferred to do work alone and rather than group works. second, cause alleviate parental guidance during the school and preschooler time so they have less knowledge regarding culture, society, and history about the world. for instance, many scientists research that a lot of employees become introverted because they have family pressure financial problems also limited friends so there is cause link with lack of communication skills and do work by themselves.
Moreover, there are also abundant of effects of the lack of Social Skills. firstly, many introvert people feel lonely because they are not easily communicating with each other, also sometimes they have feel stress, depression due to their loneliness. secondly, they do not spend time with their family members and children's, friends. so they are always spending time with their social side and working place so might be negative impact happen in their minds, for example, many people do not participate and attend any party function just because they have a lot of burdens so that way they prefer to live alone and pice full place instead of teems.
In the recapitalization, introverts are being bad personalities towards others might be the main reason behind antisocial is less parental guidance and the main effect is feeling stress loneliness by themselves.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Irrefutably
...tel Romaa on Thu, 07/29/2021 - 08:57 irrefutably, in this modern era, the youth generati...
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Line 4, column 116, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...people why they are behaving like this. first and foremost cause pressure work on the...
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Line 4, column 287, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Second
...work alone and rather than group works. second, cause alleviate parental guidance duri...
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Line 4, column 453, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
..., society, and history about the world. for instance, many scientists research that...
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Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...f effects of the lack of Social Skills. firstly, many introvert people feel lonely beca...
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Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...ss, depression due to their loneliness. secondly, they do not spend time with their fami...
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Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... family members and childrens, friends. so they are always spending time with thei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26608187135 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77499260186 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.109820455 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.083333333 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148786448719 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741705302374 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067427288397 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072412079555 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670722879024 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Irrefutably
...tel Romaa on Thu, 07/29/2021 - 08:57 irrefutably, in this modern era, the youth generati...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 116, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...people why they are behaving like this. first and foremost cause pressure work on the...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 287, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Second
...work alone and rather than group works. second, cause alleviate parental guidance duri...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 453, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
..., society, and history about the world. for instance, many scientists research that...
^^^
Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...f effects of the lack of Social Skills. firstly, many introvert people feel lonely beca...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...ss, depression due to their loneliness. secondly, they do not spend time with their fami...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... family members and childrens, friends. so they are always spending time with thei...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26608187135 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77499260186 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.109820455 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.083333333 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148786448719 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741705302374 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067427288397 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072412079555 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670722879024 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.