we can not help everyone in the world that needs help so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people believe that we should not help people in other countries as long as there are problems in our own society. I disagree with this view because I believe that we should try to help as many people as possible.
On the other hand, I accept that it is important to help our neighbours and fellow citizens. In most communities there are people who are impoverished or disadvantage in some way. It is possible to find homeless people. For example in even the wealthiest of the cities and for those who are concerned about this problem, there are usually opportunities to volunteer time or give money to support these people. In the UK people can help variety of ways from donating clothing to serving free food in the soup kitchen. as the problems are on our doorstep, and obvious ways to help, I can understand why some people feel that we should prioritise local charity.
at the same time, I believe that we help an obligation to help those who live beyond our national borders. In some countries the problems that people face are much more serious than those in our own communities and it is often even easier to help. For example when the children are dying from curable diseases in African countries, goverments and individuals in richer countries can save lives simply by paying vaccines that already exist. A small donation to an international charity might have a much greater impact than helping in our local area
In conclusion it is true that we can not help everyone but in my opinion national boundaries should not stop us from helping those who are in need.
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- Some people find living in the country enjoyable and relaxing whereas others would not like to live in the country and prefer living in the big city 64
- we can not help everyone in the world that needs help so we should be only concerned with our own communities and countries To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 53
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: As
... serving free food in the soup kitchen. as the problems are on our doorstep, and o...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: At
...at we should prioritise local charity. at the same time, I believe that we help a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68705035971 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56139609611 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525179856115 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9081588162 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.583333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330448545489 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125475863395 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873824464565 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228146618133 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555297630932 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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