nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games
What are the negative impacts of playing games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?
Nowadays, people have a variety of entertainments, and playing video games is one of those. However, people and especially kids spend time playing video games more often than before. This issue has some negative consequences and parents should have some solutions to minimize this habit.
There are several bad effects to explain why playing video games for a long duration will change people's life. First of all, children, these days spend too much time playing video games which cause people's body such as eye illness, hand disease. Moreover, children who playing video games too much can affect their's studies because they will not pay attention to learning in class and make them have bad grades in long term. Furthermore, playing video games for a long period can cause them unable to control their emotions and increase violent behaviors.
Fortunately, families should be attached to find solutions to reduce this phenomenon. Firstly, parents should set up a suitable timeline for their children so they can both learn and play properly which helps kids study effectively but still not tense on examination. In addition, parents should take care of their kids by asking how they feel, playing activities together, and encourage young kids to do outdoor activities instead of playing video games all the time at home. children should also increase their awareness to decrease spare time playing video games by themselves and focus on studying more often for their better future.
In conclusion, playing video games too much will bring negative impacts on kids. To deal with it, parents need to maintain children's schedules on both entertain and learn and kids should know about the value of time. If it works, it will minimize this dangerous threat.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 477, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Children
...aying video games all the time at home. children should also increase their awareness to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15384615385 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43622754592 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58041958042 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3059829962 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.285714286 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266032222051 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111914172525 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569771005217 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179047510947 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424853543044 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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