In many countries tradition food are being replaced by international fast food this is having a negative effect on both families and societies to what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is considered, in several Nations that, the individuals of numerous countries most preferred to eat junk food rather than local food. On the contrary, international food have also negative effects on families and communities. I completely agree with the aforementioned statement.
To commence with, food, clothes as well as deltas are the basic needs of human. Because we cannot live without food. Consequently, cousins are also represents to the cultural background of every alternative. There are many reason behind it to junk food. The first and foremost;international food creates many disorders such as obesity high blood pressure as well as carnivorous disorders. As a result, people become coach potatoes, due to the fact that they are also edited by junk food which is really easy to cooked and is main speciality of this food.
Moreover, International food also harmful for the family's relationship. In modern approach, everyone busy their lifestyle as well as they have no time to each others even their loved ones. In past mostly alternative spend their time with their families. due to the fact that they had a enough time. On the contrary many food services are started for individuals. Apart from that children are also affected by junk food. In many markets as well as top has also packeged food like noodles, pasta, other snacks and so on. Consequently, kids as well as adults are forgetting the values of traditional food which is very beneficial for our growth and health. In addition to, also international food is extremely expensive rather than local food. With this they lose huge amount to purchase these kinds of cuisines. Sometimes, individuals are attracted by International cuisine such as Chinese italians as well as Thai while these food seems to be tasty and stylish but it harmful to our health. Due to this, more and more people affected and among these societies also had a financial burden on their shoulders. To epitome ,The coronavirus, which spread to one people to another and when alternative had affected by this virus, then it was extremely affected by a plethora of individuals,Economics , communities as well as authorities.
To recapitulate, International food have a many health issues, due to the fact that individuals lose their money, health as well as families relationships.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, really, so, then, well, while, apart from, as to, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1951.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14775725594 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11434332549 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527704485488 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9564626118 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8260869565 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4782608696 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86956521739 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298316297424 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967298015565 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073816557766 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212319622207 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455049697124 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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