Although many people value their public parks, this space could be better used for other purposes such as residential areas for the ever-growing population or to develop business and boost economies.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?
It is often argued that people can make a profit from public parks to develop houses or businesses. Although it can create jobs and enhance economies for the increasing population, I strongly disagree with this point of view.
First of all, green areas play an important role in maintaining people’s health. Trees in recreational playgrounds absorb carbon dioxide and other chemicals in the air and this helps cleaning the environment for the city. People can enjoy better air quality while exercise and stay fit. It can lead to a stronger body, a healthier immune system, and fewer chances to catch the illness. Moreover, public parks offer space which keeps everyone away from the noises of the traffic jams or stress in working. The trees and flowers can make our lives more colorful and less boring. Being close to nature is not only good for physical activities but also it can improve our mental health.
Besides, other species such as birds and insects can also take advantage of public gardens. Since parks often have a diverse range of plants and trees, these places prevent natural habitats from being destroyed. If green areas are converted into parking lots or shopping centers, there will be nowhere for birds to build nests, plants can barely survive and insects can extinct.
In conclusion, green spaces serve an equally important purpose in the citizens’ lives and should not be replaced. I suggest the governments build more suburb centers as is would provide more employment opportunities, boost economic growth and relieve air pollution and traffic problems in the cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to clean' or 'clean'.
Suggestion: to clean; clean
...her chemicals in the air and this helps cleaning the environment for the city. People ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11832061069 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49680467087 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648854961832 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9180336408 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7857142857 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218269661394 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692022049826 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503357913553 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13177860507 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591496678958 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.