3. The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As the number of road accidents has increased dramatically in recent times, a number of people argue that there’ll be stricter punishments on traffic offences. I completely agree with this idea for a variety of reasons.
On the one hand, imposing heavier punishments on those who break the traffic laws would deter careless drivers from committing the same offence again. In addition, stricter punishments can also act as an effective deterrent for other drivers to conform to the traffic laws. For example, when a driver breaks the law many times, the police can suspend their driving license as a punishment, preventing other people from making the same mistakes when driving on the road. As a result, the number of traffic-related offences will decline and there’ll be fewer traffic accidents, ensuring road safety for everyone.
On the other hand, bringing in stricter punishments is not the only solution to traffic offences, but there’ll are some more effective ways of tackling this issue. For instance, as more campaigns are launched, public awareness about road safety and the consequences of traffic accidents can be enhanced. Thus, people will be more careful when driving or cycling on the road to ensure their and their families’ won safety. Furthermore, more surveillance cameras can be placed on street corners; as a consequence; those who are attempting to break the traffic laws will be prevented from committing the offence.
To conclude, stricter punishment can act as an effective solution to traffic offences. However, it is not the sole solution as there are many other ways to combat the problem such as raising public awareness and placing more surveillance cameras on street corners.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 551, Rule ID: FEWER_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'less traffic'?
Suggestion: less traffic
...d offences will decline and there’ll be fewer traffic accidents, ensuring road safety for eve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26181818182 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85090445269 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501818181818 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7036461102 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.583333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142302179962 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621401341334 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332952974395 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964214106089 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143908472769 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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