The idea of having a single career is becoming obsolete. the new fashion will be to have several careers of ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues through-out life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
While the latest trend especially amongst the youngsters is to embrace a variety of job/educational roles, I personally do not agree with this trend.
Even though this seems to be a new concept, this actually dates way back to the times where people would opt for multiple jobs or careers only to have a stable income to run the family and to secure the future. Now a days even though one career or job suffices for a stable income people choose various other options to accomplish an interest, skill, or hobby so as to show case multiple occupations/studies which can also give an upper hand in job achievement or progression. These multi career personalities I guess have coined the term work-life balance, and while this movement is taking fast pace, I feel this sets off to be very exhausting. Having a full time job and pursuing to aim or learn for a new career could lead for a person not to have any family or social life which slowly but ultimately will lead to decreased focus and dedication.
Though for some having just one job or career could be monotonous, I tend to incline towards such a career. With constant evolution in every field, knowledge has to be updated every now and then according to new studies and technologies. For example,doctors have to keep themselves updated with the latest treatments to cure illnesses which become resistant over time to old medication and treatments. Like wise a surgeon has to keep him/her-self updated to new technologies and methods of less invasive surgical procedures which are introduced every now an again. A single career also keeps one focusd. Mastering one ability makes us perfect in what we do which will also leave us to have a balanced family,social and work life.
As we progress in our career, benefits such as good salary and higher designation will folow.
So I guess, “Jack of all trades and a master of none." sumes it up.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, then, while, as to, for example, i feel, i guess, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81212121212 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85060527138 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.4776293645 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.153846154 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283927425925 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100137748111 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567967191197 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12359552398 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792860253652 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.