You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter:
Say what the problem is
Describe the accommodation you thought you were getting
Ask the provider to solve the problem
Here is a band 8 IELTS letter on this topic written by one of our students. Need help with IELTS writing?
Dear Sir,
I am writing this latter lament about the present scenario of accommodation
provided by you as I am taking two weeks course at Oxford college.
Last week, I got enrolled in a fortnight business study program. All the facilities
provided are good, but I am dissatisfied with the cuisine provided to me, as I told you in advance about my dietary requirement. By eating an unsuitable snacks, I generally fall ill and cannot concentrate on my studies.
I clearly remember as you promised that I would be provided special attention regarding my food restrictions and your words did not prove worth it. Since my company is paying you a sufficient amount and I have all the rights to get a proper meal.
As cuisine is prepared according to the weekly plan, you can direct the cooks to prepare something special for those to whom this menu does not suit. Apart from this, if this seems difficult for them, allow me to cook myself, so that
I can prepare something for myself.
Looking forward to a quick response from your side.
Yours faithfully,
Jarrett AUR
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 154, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'snack'?
Suggestion: snack
...ry requirement. By eating an unsuitable snacks, I generally fall ill and cannot concen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, regarding, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86021505376 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68673079644 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688172043011 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 1.83505154639 381% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0958234635 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168033462111 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604523964813 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547096049489 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0667337297933 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522810664146 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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