Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Knowledge is always secondary to imagination in most scholastic and professional endeavors
Knowledge is a very important part of human's congnitive process of learning. It has been passed to us through generations and obtained through meticulous efforts done in circumspecting the environment and surroundings. It is cognitive process which is successor of logical thinking or primary base for more advance knowledge. It has led to inventions of fire and wheel which has paved for new inventions in the future. However, the contribution of imagination to fields of scholastic and professional cannot be highly ignored. I think it has equally paved roads for future inventions and discoveries which have changed human life all together.
For a person, to pursue a career one has to undergo meticulous effort of completing his degree and gain a basic understanding of the field he or she wishes to work in. This could only be achieved through knowledge earned through learning process. But on other hand, the great scientist, Sir Nikola Tesla , was considered to be talking something equivalent to, rubbish when he said there is existence of A.C.(Alternating Current) current just like DC(Direct Current) current. People had just started believing in DC current supply and he proclaimed and went onto discover the A.C. current. That discovery has changed our lives since, all our electronic appliances are now powered by A.C. current supply.
Another example could be of Wright brothers who basis their imagination dreamed of flying in air. They coined the invention of first airplane and once were considered as fools for their strong power of imagination. If they would not have believed in their imagination, man would not have airplane now as easy mode of tranport for long distances.
Many entrepreneurs, poets and writers like Jeff Bezos, Google's founders and Elon musk used their power of imagination and what we now have is incredible amount of information at the tips of our hands and by placing the order just through an app from your in favourite store, anything is possible. Writers like J.K. rowling have used their power of imagination to coin one of the best books of all time the "Harry Potter Series" equally loved by children and youngsters.
But one cannot only follow process of imagination but has to do rational thinking. Imagine the court business bieng done only on the basis of imagination !! Each one will have different imagination of crime scene. The governmnet official business, courts and companies have to work on prevoius knowledge yo learn and discover something new. One point to be noted here is contribution of data mining techniques used in computer science to predict future event. By mining availabe data we can gain insights and be cautious and wary about the decisions and take informed decisons.
So imagination and knowledge must go hand-in-hand to get more learning and at the same time for discovery and invention of new scientific wonders, such as travelling to mars each day from earth in distant future we need imagination as well !
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 327, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rimary base for more advance knowledge. It has led to inventions of fire and wheel...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... have changed human life all together. For a person, to pursue a career one has...
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Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d, the great scientist, Sir Nikola Tesla , was considered to be talking something ...
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Line 3, column 408, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Alternating
... when he said there is existence of A.C.Alternating Current current just like DCDirect Curr...
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Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Current
...d there is existence of A.C.Alternating Current current just like DCDirect Current current. Peo...
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Line 3, column 455, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Current
...ting Current current just like DCDirect Current current. People had just started believing in D...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re now powered by A.C. current supply. Another example could be of Wright broth...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y mode of tranport for long distances. Many entrpreneurs, poets and writers lik...
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Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of information at the tips of our hands and by placing the order just through an...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lly loved by children and youngsters. But one cannot only follow process of im...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... decisions and take informed decisons. So imagination and knowledge must go han...
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Line 11, column 170, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'mar'.
Suggestion: mar
...ientific wonders, such as travelling to mars each day from earth in distant future w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, well, as to, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2518.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 489.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14928425358 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87523977567 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 215.323595506 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572597137014 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 782.1 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5159768833 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.454545455 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2272727273 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0929618539398 0.243740707755 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0294043360168 0.0831039109588 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301352501871 0.0758088955206 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0447998528053 0.150359130593 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01966820157 0.0667264976115 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 100.480337079 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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