Nowadays, more and more women decide to have children later in their life? Why? Does the advantage or disadvantage?
In recent years, the trend of delaying parenthood has gained popularity among millennial women. This trend can be put down to today fast-paced life and other several impediments but the merits it brings far overshadows its demerits for some rationales outlined below.
There are two key reasons as to why many women strongly advocate late childbirth. Firstly, more young people nowadays decide to give priority over their career since working to them is way more crucial than giving birth to a baby, which may distract them from their passion and spare them little time to spend for themselves. To cite an example, such inflexible occupations like emergency doctors or flight attendants require women to constantly switch their working hours or work night shifts. As a result, they are inundated with both their work and childcare, thus rendering their children’s upbringing ineffective. Secondly, rearing children which demands a huge budget ranging from feeding to educational fees may be an uphill task for the young who are still inexperienced to strike a balance between their working life and family.
However, it is worth noticing that postponing parenthood actually pays dividends when being seen from a different perspective. First and foremost, women often have a baby when they are financially stable and independent, which means their children can adopt a better childcare with more advanced parenting skills and be ensured proper education. To be more specific, children who are raised by competent and sophisticated parents are proved to be more intelligent and thoughtful compared to those whose family background is unstable. Besides, a great deal of studies have proved that giving birth later in life could mean that women live a longer life. In a case study of Menopause, women who had their kid after 33 could double the chance of living to 95 or older as opposed to those who had babies at the age of 29. In addition, 30-year-old moms also report having higher energy, better fitness and fewer aches and pains than 20-year-old moms.
To conclude, delaying the role of being a mother is mainly due to financial-related issues. However, this trend obviously brings about more notable benefits that are advantageous to both mothers and their children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 766, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, thus, as to, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1914.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21525885559 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74371632476 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640326975477 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3259304676 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.6 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4666666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322702950112 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900934773181 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676669027352 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158418777666 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072905924206 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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