Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
With regard to the environment, the common perspective is that the chief environmental complication is caused by the extinction of certain plants and animals. Conversely, others believe that other environmental issues have greater ramifications. While I agree with both views, my opinion would favor the latter.
One of the main reasons for the extinction of plants and animals is due to deforestation and hunting respectively. During the caveman period, hunting was a natural human activity that was required to survive and fend for the family. Moreover, animals were hunted for their skin and tusks to make ornaments and clothes as well. The infamous Dodo bird and several other species were hunted down to extinction. However, over the past century, humans have evolved and their food habits and way of life have evolved with them. While hunting is no more a quotidian task of a human, one can't say the same about deforestation. In order to accommodate the growing population and industries cutting down trees has become typical. Flora and fauna are indispensable to the environment. So, the loss of even a few can cause catastrophic environmental repercussions.
The need of the hour is to find solutions to preclude environmental quandaries like climate change, a phenomenon which will decimate animals and humans alike. over the past few decades, global warming shot up by such whopping levels that even the ice caps have begun to melt. A permanent shift in the global climate will have a detrimental effect on the planet. All the species indigenous to cold and snowy regions will naturally perish due to the unfavorable environmental conditions that climate change will bring. On the long run, the planet will actually become colder than warmer despite global warming. The ice caps being the whitest part of the Earth naturally reflect heat and balances the temperature on the surface. With the ice caps gone, the temperatures will fall drastically and harm species that require warmer conditions to survive. Not to mention, the ocean is constantly heating up due to the increase in carbon dioxide levels, making it unsuitable for aquatic life. We must act now, to curb this disaster. Much like every other war, this too must be fought for survival and in the hope for a better tomorrow.
Since global warming leads to the loss of hundreds of species including humans all at the same time it is of greater importance. Having said that, diminishing flora and fauna will always prevail as a principal environmental issue irrespective of it's the cause.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Over
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d in the hope for a better tomorrow. Since global warming leads to the loss of hun...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...pal environmental issue irrespective of its the cause.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, conversely, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2146.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 420.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10952380952 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8457351628 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569047619048 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3931415875 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4166666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160709395651 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442319935201 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427163305431 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108186564414 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463629832637 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.