Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is true that there are conflicting views about the best way to learn news. While some argue that newspapers could be a beneficial way to get updated about the news, I strongly agree with those who believe that learning news through media could be a more optimal option.
On the one hand, the disadvantages of learning news through newspapers may outweigh the advantages. To begin with, it takes time and money to purchase newspapers as each individual needs to spend time commuting on the road in order to get to the bookstores or department stores selling newspapers. Moreover, the practice of reading newspapers might only be suitable for the old generations as they are not likely to get familiar with media platforms.
On the other hand, keeping informed of news through media could be a best replacement. Firstly, media provide readers with quick access to the news, thereby saving time for them to read more about other breaking news. Secondly, media platforms offer the learners a wide range of choice in one click regarding the subjects that individuals enjoy. For instance, there are numerous websites like The Guardian, New York Times which would provide a variety of topics that people can choose to read. Nevertheless, a wide range of websites could lead to some untrustworthy materials, therefore the authorities should impose stricter censorship on these media with the aim to protect the readers.
In conclusion, there are some drawbacks when learning news through newspapers whereas it is a much more optimal selection when choosing media as a method to get updated about the news.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...informed of news through media could be a best replacement. Firstly, media provid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, may, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0679245283 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69993605135 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558490566038 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4737157419 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.090909091 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.1818181818 7.06120827912 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342184268303 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14252268466 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099081809514 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218068840246 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662582667221 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.