Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it as getting easier. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is a popular trend that the ever-increasing global population tends to migrate from their countryside to other metropolises. Therefore, the standards of living have been changing gradually. It is debatable whether residing in a cosmopolitan city is more unfavorable or not. As there are several reasons suggesting that the former is true, I am highly in favor of it.
Firstly, it is undeniable that the elevated citizens in urban areas are because of several conveniences, one of which is health care services. Specifically, there is a substantial raising in the amount of polluted atmosphere and water which incurred a significant number of respiratory problems. Luckily, a bigger city outperforms rural areas in the proportion of top-tier hospitals and pharmacies. To exemplify, in Hanoi capital, where has a quite high population density, the government invested various modern facilities and infrastructures to maximize citizens life. As a result, not only are the risks of chronic or contagious diseases eased but humans’ living standard is also enhanced. Unless some people do not emigrate to a more advanced city, they would have no opportunity to be treated correctly.
Secondly, it is the bustling lifestyle that exerts substantial troubles on residents’ burden. To elaborate, nowadays, not only do labors work hardly at their office, but they must also accomplish many household chores when coming back home. To make matters worse, the bosses expect to achieve more part of contributions from their employees, thus, many staffs have to bring their heavy workload to home. Admittedly, said things are unavoidable due to the conditions of subsistence such as monthly invoices. Nonetheless, these lead to a couple of bad habits, a sedentary lifestyle, or a shortage of bonding time with friends and relatives.
In conclusion, in my perspective, it is true to say that raising more issues when individuals incline to centers increasingly. Thus, the authorities are expected to find out the solutions to mitigate such troubles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually put before the verb 'work'.
Suggestion: hardly work
...elaborate, nowadays, not only do labors work hardly at their office, but they must also acc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.396875 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17520760886 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640625 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1209148493 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.588235294 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0761817770024 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0214591590221 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279789113962 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0433796274869 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264909871354 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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