Some people think saving money is good, but others think that spending money is a better way to enjoy life.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Without any doubt, how to use money intelligently and reasonably is an interesting concern in all periods of the human revolution and in many parts of the world, as well. While there is a strong argument about spending money on enjoyment and entertainment in life, I believe that saving money is a necessary plan for risks and later life.
On the one hand, one of the main reasons why many people tend to use money expending on life might come from their worries about death. When it comes to beliefs of the death, it is usually said that all money cannot be brought along. The more money people make in an attempt to save, the more lost they could get if an unpredictable death happens in life. In addition, people could boost their positive emotions such as endophyte, and reduce their stress caused by daily workload in modern society. Moreover, spending money purchasing or participating in recreational activities also enhance social developments because of not only contributing taxes for the authorities but also increasing income for inhabitants. Therefore, spending money is a good way to enjoy life.
On the other hand, I support saving money, despite many above arguments. Saving money could be considered a long-term plan for both retirement and unpredictable accidents. With the amount of money saved, it could ensure people facing unemployment or pandemic to avoid a homeless situation. Thanks to this, people also help to lessen social burdens, for example, the government's financial support, health and food suppliers. Besides, saving is not too economic to make it impossible to enjoy their life. To save, people could save a small part of their income, and use the others for recreational activities, which makes them more secure about their finances. Parents could teach their children the responsibility of money by saving habits as soon as possible that would bring many benefits for children’s later life.
In conclusion, to enjoy their life, people should spend their money reasonably, and I think they also should have saving habit instead of spending all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10526315789 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76025869748 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558479532164 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6740089 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.125 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251184577528 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993670858881 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600513380115 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174120513676 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00593351225292 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.