Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that this way of punishment is not accessible in today's world.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
Death penalty has been debatable issue in terms of its morality and fairness for recent years. There are some people who believe that offenders should be sentenced to death for heavy crimes. At the same time, others consider that nowadays death penalty is absolutely wrong. This essay will discuss both sides of this kind of punishment.
On the one hand, the death sentence is thought to be fair for serial murderers, abusers or maniacs. Imprisonment often is not enough for them to change their minds and prevent their future perpetrations. Therefore, some of released offenders committed crimes again. According to research conducted by the Russian Ministry of Healthcare in 2017 about 60 percent of law-breakers became recidivists after getting free from imprisonment. In other words, serious crimes demand serious punishment and sometimes especially dangerous offenders' death is the only way to prevent their doings.
One the other hand, death is an extremely radical statement and can lead to irreparable consequences. That is because there are a lot of examples of judgment's error, when innocent people were arrested and incarcerated but guilty people still were free. Hence, if death penalty is accepted and false criminals are executed nobody would ever fix this error in future when real offenders are found. For example, the Russian Division of Procedural Proceedings in Criminal Cases in 2020 identified that 46 percent of judgments were mistaken. Thus, death penalty is a high risk and should not be allowed.
In conclusion, this essay shed light on problem of capital punishment and its possibility in modern society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is often
...erers, abusers or maniacs. Imprisonment often is not enough for them to change their min...
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Line 3, column 527, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'offenders'' or 'offender's'?
Suggestion: offenders'; offender's
...ment and sometimes especially dangerous offenders death is the only way to prevent their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33976833977 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74730977072 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629343629344 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4182917311 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262922877627 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822030697293 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472207033648 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145463451487 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732066353203 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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