The pie chart shows information about the world water resources and the bar chart shows the utilization of water in Egypt, Saudi Arabia and Canada.
The pie chart illustrates the percentages of fresh water and salty water and the bar chart gives the information about the proportion of water usage in 3 countries, namely Egypt, Saudi Arabia, Canada.
In general, what stands out from the graph is that the proportion of ice water is the highest in the fresh water group. It is also clear to see that the percentages of domestic water usage in Egypt and Saudi Arabia are at least 4 times as high as that of Canada.
The percentage of fresh water in the world made up 97% in total, and the other is for salty water. About the fresh water, the proportion of ice water accounted for 70%. In the meantime, the figure for ground water is double fold than that of ice water, at 20% and 10% respectively.
The proportion of water which is used for domestic accounts for more than 65% and just under 80% in Egypt and Saudi Arabia respectively. A reverse trend could be seen in Canada, with only 10% in this kind of water usage. In the meanwhile, the highest proportion of water usage in industry registers in Canada, with a mere 65%. Such a opposite trend are also seen in this kind when the figures for Egypt and Saudi Arabia are only about 10% for both.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 332, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while, at least, in general, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44343891403 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35084313005 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457013574661 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4419801986 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382370453897 0.215688989381 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176342589398 0.103423049105 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122435363036 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286469956795 0.15604864568 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140803029719 0.0819641961636 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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