Because of the progress in medicine, people are living longer now. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
For every period of history humanity has tried to find the way to immortality. There is a fact that people's life expectancy is increasing due to medical development. This essay will discuss positive and negative aspects of a long life.
On the one hand, an upward trend of life expectancy shows higher life standards in the country. That means that there is scientific advancement, especially in medicine and healthcareness, which helps people to stay healthy as long as possible. Hence, this fact makes life in this country safer and more attractive. For example, in such developed countries as Japan and the USA there are 29 and 24 percent of people older than 65 years respectively in 2021. Thus, a high percent of the older population indicates good living conditions in the country.
On the other hand, the growth of the older population leads to negative changings in the economic sphere. That is because older people often cannot work and they live on the government's financial resources, which in its turn are provided by taxes. Therefore, the more people who get older the more taxes should be paid to the government by younger generations. For example, the United Nations in 2018 predicted that every sixth person in the world will be older than 65 years by the beginning of 2050, which means that every 2 workable people will "support" at least one elderly person. In other words, an increase in the number of the old population leads to financial burdens for the working population.
In conclusion, although a rise of life expectancy is an important indicator of countries' development, I think that economic problems caused by this phenomenon are critical.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, thus, at least, for example, i think, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05734767025 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89727697091 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0655819229 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.785714286 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118369193788 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416984460019 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348520617203 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722726043992 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176099984999 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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