Some people believe that traveling is a valuable experience; others say it is a waste of time and money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People’s opinions diverge regarding the core values of discoveries and trips. While there are some controversial issues whether traveling takes a great amount of time and budget, I believe that it would be better to consider excursions as a necessary aspect of absorbing knowledge.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why it could be argued that we are wasting time funds, and budget traveling. The first one is that when we embark on journeys, we have to prepare in advance and procrastinate our work, even though it is only a short break that lasts about a few days because it seems strange to spend a considerable amount of time traveling but consume it for a dozen jobs. Secondly, if individuals do not have well-off living standards, they might not be able to bear numerous essential expenses for luxury trips. For example, the average-income Vietnamese residents that fluctuate just about 5000 dollars per year will have to work extremely hard and save as much money as possible to go on a trip.
In spite of the above arguments, I advocate the view that traveling offers a plethora of precious experiences. The main benefit of journeys is that we have opportunities to have access to marvelous landscapes, explore natural beauties and a variety of tribes from every corner of the world. This means that instead of confining ourselves up in an academic work environment, we can easily acquire valuable and practical experiences from vacations and trips. Moreover, historical, geographical, and customs lessons are more likely to be fascinating and engaging than ever.
In conclusion, while there are some financial and time barriers to going on a trip, I personally believe that it is an amazing way to broaden valuable horizons.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05862068966 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90360594215 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627586206897 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.4843935875 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.363636364 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166705478231 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577936943647 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467802911784 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105977663049 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437733428213 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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