Is it a good idea to have a pet with a newborn?
Give both views opinion
Millions of households feed at least one animal companion in their house. There are growing concerns as to whether or not people should nourish a pet while their family has a new baby. In my personal perspective, I advocate the ideal of both having a pet and a baby by discussing both views of the issue.
The pivotal reason to not have a pet together with a newborn is because of the baby’s sake. In the first year, babies are too susceptible to diseases and therefore require a highly hygienic environment, which is impossible for those families having pets. Besides, taking care of a newborn requires lots of time and energy, leaving it difficult for people to share their hectic schedules. As a result, family members intend to be more fatiguing with those animals as well as their new coming. For example, my friend, who has just given birth, had to send her cat to her hometown where it will be taken care of by her grandma. Although those negative propositions, possessing a pet can facilitate humans in many other features.
Rather than living a tedious life without a pet, people can make their family, as well as their newborn, develop comprehensively. First, according to psychology experts, animal companions can reduce the risk of stress, isolation, and mental disorders, which are common in the new mother. Second, if people have an appropriate preparation consulted by experts, it can be definitely feasible to keep those animals without any worry about being infected. Finally, some animals, especially dogs, are extremely loyal and have maternal instincts, making them spend all their time playing and protecting kids. A recent article in The Guardian shows that the conspicuous trends to feed at least one pet are increasing substantially this year with more than thousands of families adopting a new pet when they have new members.
All in all, if all factors are contemplated, it is easy to reach a conclusion that the positive effect of having a pet with a new baby surpasses its drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: WHETHER[4]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
...their house. There are growing concerns as to whether or not people should nourish a pet while their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, well, while, as to, at least, for example, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95588235294 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7719850981 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594117647059 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4237644013 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211380706905 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752264751327 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079783355154 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135163206491 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260780900895 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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