Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born.
What might be the reasons for this?
What are the advantages and disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
We all are existing on this globe, however every person's space is different from one another which are classified on the basis of the nationality, state and city. Its an individual's choice where they want to live and how they want to pursue theirs's lives.
While some beings like to explore new cities and places, whereas some humans keep there place of residing close to theirs's birth place.
There could be lot of explanations, why people tend to live near to there native place. Firstly, lets take emotional side of this, for some being near to your family , your parents is important. I believe, these people do not want to leave their guardians in first place and live their lives. Mostly, they want to be supportive and physically present whenever their close ones needs them in challenging and adverse situations. Secondly, when you are staying at a place for long time, you have friends, memories of all the joyful time, people with whom you connect and cherish old times. Though, everyone is occupied, but in difficult times, you always want someone to be their to hold you back and these companions are this support system. There could be other possibilities for staying close, for instance , your work required you to be their, you never got an opportunity to leave and you like being in a comfort zone.
So spending you whole lives near you birth place can have both pros and cons. First of all, lets talk about benefits, you have support system who are available for you in difficult times. Besides this, you grow with familiar faces and people, so in a way , in later times of lives, your kids can grow with your friend's kids. It can feel like a huge family, growing up in healthy neighborhood. You have trustworthy people around and your family stay close. But along with pros there could be cons as well, for instance there could lot of more better career opportunities which you might have missed, lot of new experiences and people you could have met. Being an Army kid, I love exploring new cities, but if you stay at one place all of you life, you misses excitement of a new place, stranger people.
To summarize, its an individual's decision to make, whether they want to spend most of their lives near to their birth place or not, as both have there upsides and downsides.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: it's; it is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69306930693 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36138261122 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529702970297 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 5.43587174349 331% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4296138003 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207906929118 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809631568454 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486962587023 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121360626394 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491736910677 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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