Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, while others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Whether the governmental budget should cover the art and culture’s expenses or not has recently sparked a heated debate. I will discuss both of the points below even though I assume that expenditure for art and culture is worthwhile.
On the one hand, several people express disapproval of investing in craft and practice since there are other fields that are crucial. Serious concerns such as new infrastructure for transport, education system and modern devices for national healthcare urgently need aid from the government with a view to bettering the residents’ living standard. Should the authority determine the wrong distribution of spending, the local residents bitterly undergo poverty. Furthermore, countries all around the globe have currently experienced the deterioration of the environment. Leaders of each nation should combat these environmental issues by providing renewable and environmentally friendly energy that require a large sum of money other than pointlessly funding the development of art and culture.
On the other hand, I firmly state that financial support for skill and tradition is worthwhile as it plays a fundamental role in national identity, especially in a diverse cultural world at present. Take a museum as an example, which merely exhibits Vietnamese custom and lifestyle, draws a lot of attention from both foreign and domestic travellers. Furthermore, visitors are also fascinated to partake in annual parades, carnivals and festivals like Cherry Blossom Festival in Japan. As a consequence, much more job opportunities are created for the natives directly boosting their income. Not only does it promote the economy but it favorably offers a positive image of a country as well. For instance, Hoi An town is famous for its antique and ancient features. Its buildings and streets reflect the history of Vietnam that remarkably produce a unique heritage site.
In short, these aforementioned reasons prove that investing in culture and art ‘s advantages exceed its disadvantages. However, governments are supposed to tackle significant problems mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, in short, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58566978193 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08400830562 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688473520249 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3945831153 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0625 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25151409897 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638819990156 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602039195324 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144188934275 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458586484273 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.17 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 78.4519038076 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.