John Crawford once quoted that "Love is a fire. But whether it is going to warm YOUR hearth or burn down YOUR house, YOU can never tell." Love has always been the timeless theme of all times, however it bears different fruits. For college students, love will be a beautiful emotion if they know how to cherish and preserve it. However, amour at university will lead to reduced learning, unwanted pregnancy and injury to students and their families if Young people do not have a mature will.
First, love appears in college in a popular way because this is the age when Young people feel more clearly about love between men and women. Love will easily arise when students leave their family to study alone in a city, when loneliness overwhelms in university years. And because this is an inevitable human emotional need, it is not difficult for Youngsters to want to be cared for and close to someone. A truth was born that the true happiness of man is love. However, it is a complicated matter because good love at the right time produces good fruit and vice versa, wrong time and purpose will cause negative consequences.
Academic decline is one of the notable consequences of falling in love in college. Research shows that love at a Young age easily makes them think only of their love and neglect their work because the image of the lover usually appears in the mind. Another effect of this is an unwanted pregnancy. Evidence shows that up to 60% of pregnancies are teenagers and Young adults each year, including university students. In addition, if the limit is exceeded at this age, it can lead to certain injuries when breaking up, causing pain for the couple and the whole family, especially when the girls are pregnant. Some people think that love at this age will have more experiences and richer feelings about love, but it should only stop at liking and keeping it pure because the disastrous consequences will continue to happen.
To overcome this, Young people should have for themselves a certain orientation about the university goal of study. And look forward to a true love when feelings mature. For me personally, thinking about the right person in my life leads to a sense of control over my emotions.
To sum up, love is a beautiful thing. However, falling in love in college can lead to bad consequences that Young people need to be careful about.
John Crawford once quoted that "Love is a fire. But whether it is going to warm YOUR hearth or burn down YOUR house, YOU can never tell." Love has always been the timeless theme of all times, however it bears different fruits. For college students, love will be a beautiful emotion if they know how to cherish and preserve it. However, amour at university will lead to reduced learning, unwanted pregnancy and injury to students and their families if Young people do not have a mature will.
First, love appears in college in a popular way because this is the age when Young people feel more clearly about love between men and women. Love will easily arise when students leave their family to study alone in a city, when loneliness overwhelms in university years. And because this is an inevitable human emotional need, it is not difficult for Youngsters to want to be cared for and close to someone. A truth was born that the true happiness of man is love. However, it is a complicated matter because good love at the right time produces good fruit and vice versa, wrong time and purpose will cause negative consequences.
Academic decline is one of the notable consequences of falling in love in college. Research shows that love at a Young age easily makes them think only of their love and neglect their work because the image of the lover usually appears in the mind. Another effect of this is an unwanted pregnancy. Evidence shows that up to 60% of pregnancies are teenagers and Young adults each year, including university students. In addition, if the limit is exceeded at this age, it can lead to certain injuries when breaking up, causing pain for the couple and the whole family, especially when the girls are pregnant. Some people think that love at this age will have more experiences and richer feelings about love, but it should only stop at liking and keeping it pure because the disastrous consequences will continue to happen.
To overcome this, Young people should have for themselves a certain orientation about the university goal of study. And look forward to a true love when feelings mature. For me personally, thinking about the right person in my life leads to a sense of control over my emotions.
To sum up, love is a beautiful thing. However, falling in love in college can lead to bad consequences that Young people need to be careful about.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 32, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a popular way" with adverb for "popular"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, so, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78260869565 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49679016325 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531400966184 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 632.7 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7601221433 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383164006772 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111693883506 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122894031805 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226033002246 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170892706961 0.056905535591 300% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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