In life, each person needs their other half to withstand the storms of life. Personally, I totally agree with college dating. That is because college love will help people become more mature, confident and happier.
To begin with, people can learn about love without having any preconceptions.When they're in high school and fall in love with someone, there are lots of outside circumstances that affect the way they see the other person. Let's face it, they still worry about what other people think of them when they are a teenager. People don't allow others to determine how they view themselves, the world, or anyone at college since they are more concentrated on being the person they dream about.That approach helps people to love someone sincerely and freshly, rather than with a preconceived notion of who they are.
Besides, having someone who can share everything with each other will help people gain new experiences and also learn from their mistakes.For instance,YOU can share some of YOUR secrets and express all the joys and sorrows with YOUR lover without hesitation.Whenever YOU feel stressed or happy, there will always be a person who will spend their time listening and understanding for YOU.Therefore,college love is necessary for everyone to help them balance their emotions.
Moreover,loving in university will turn people into mature ones. Couple’s breakup is something that can’t be evitable to most people, but the lessons it leaves behind are priceless. People usually share experiences with their partners to teach them about life, work and social problems, the way to improve good things and avoid bad ones. Even though they can’t be together for the rest of their life, each one has developed more skills for themselves and strengthened their thoughts so that their next relationship could be better.
However, anything has two-side,college love can also be harmful to people. If they don’t consider hard enough before getting into a romantic relationship with someone, they may regret later.Paying too much attention to their relationship will damage their freetime and study results.In addition,tragics will come at any moments if people choose their wrong lover, for example, a man kill a girl because she broke up with him recently.Therefore, people should think seriously about the advantages and the consequences before getting into a romantic relationship.
In conclusion, college love can improve happiness, self confidence and growth for everyone who chooses the right lover to spend their YOUth with.
In life, each person needs their other half to withstand the storms of life. Personally, I totally agree with college dating. That is because college love will help people become more mature, confident and happier.
To begin with, people can learn about love without having any preconceptions.When they're in high school and fall in love with someone, there are lots of outside circumstances that affect the way they see the other person. Let's face it, they still worry about what other people think of them when they are a teenager. People don't allow others to determine how they view themselves, the world, or anyone at college since they are more concentrated on being the person they dream about.That approach helps people to love someone sincerely and freshly, rather than with a preconceived notion of who they are.
Besides, having someone who can share everything with each other will help people gain new experiences and also learn from their mistakes.For instance,YOU can share some of YOUR secrets and express all the joys and sorrows with YOUR lover without hesitation.Whenever YOU feel stressed or happy, there will always be a person who will spend their time listening and understanding for YOU.Therefore,college love is necessary for everyone to help them balance their emotions.
Moreover,loving in university will turn people into mature ones. Couple’s breakup is something that can’t be evitable to most people, but the lessons it leaves behind are priceless. People usually share experiences with their partners to teach them about life, work and social problems, the way to improve good things and avoid bad ones. Even though they can’t be together for the rest of their life, each one has developed more skills for themselves and strengthened their thoughts so that their next relationship could be better.
However, anything has two-side,college love can also be harmful to people. If they don’t consider hard enough before getting into a romantic relationship with someone, they may regret later.Paying too much attention to their relationship will damage their freetime and study results.In addition,tragics will come at any moments if people choose their wrong lover, for example, a man kill a girl because she broke up with him recently.Therefore, people should think seriously about the advantages and the consequences before getting into a romantic relationship.
In conclusion, college love can improve happiness, self confidence and growth for everyone who chooses the right lover to spend their YOUth with.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2150.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33498759305 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01421736859 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570719602978 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.285806523 49.4020404114 280% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.571428571 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7857142857 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.526392332877 0.244688304435 215% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1996279278 0.084324248473 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114598940839 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.313665676355 0.151304729494 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.199397262133 0.056905535591 350% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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