In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer. What are the causes? What can be done to address this situation?
Today, although the youngsters not only have a good health or possess all materials, they cannot live happily. There are several reasons that lead to this social problem and some solutions should be taken to deal with this phenomenon.
To begin with, a state-of-art lifestyle and imbalance between work and life are two major factors that lead to the unhappy life. In terms of the former, due to the advance technologies, young residents tend to communicate with their peers via social media such as Messengers or Zalo so they lack face-to-face interactions. This isolation may immerse people in the loneliness and they are hardly contented despite having all assets. Regarding the latter, with the constant pressure at school or work, the young citizens have gradually lost the directions of life because they solely spend most of time studying and working. Therefore, the two reasons mentioned above are the main causes that lead to a sense of dissatisfaction for humans.
It is necessary that some possible steps could be implemented to address the issue. The first measure is that people must not rely heavily on the smartphone so that they can have more social connections with their counterparts. The second solution is that youngsters need to arrange proper time for their family and friends, which helps them release stress as well as tiredness. Finally, more recreational places including amusement parks or free instrument courses should be provided for young people by the government that will contribute greatly to enhance the fulfillment of people.
In conclusion, albeit the heavy workload and insufficient interactions having adverse impacts on human life, there are several effective ways that can make young residents more satisfied with their living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, regarding, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29078014184 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.764120139 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627659574468 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7815998814 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.333333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170510573532 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625446200634 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412687662995 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10429654877 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028393253329 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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