Some observers say that police officers should be recruited from the communities where they work so that they have local knowledge. Other people say that this is unnecessary, or even undesirable.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Criminals today have become more and more devious and creative, so the need for trustworthy police officers is paramount. That is why there is an opinion from some people that the police should be locally hired; nevertheless, others and I opine that this method is not always a good option when it comes to crime deterrence.
Some supporters claim it is crucial that local recruitment should be carried out, for this types of police officers would firstly know the locale in minute details, which is true indeed. Every community has certain social, political and religious settings. The indigenous officers would be fully aware of the criminals’ backgrounds and anticipate the crimes possibly committed. Thus the result could be of more successful percentage as compared to that of the law enforcers from another place. The second worthy element is that the local police more easily gain valuable information from many sources, leading to more potent evidence and higher conviction rates at trials. This would contribute a lot to bringing perpetrators to light, making them pay the price for what they have done. For the two justifications, the idea of local recruitment may sound perfectly ideal.
However, from my own perspective, I agree that it is truly challenging and sometimes problematic in the battle against crime if law enforcement members are recruited from the local community. For starters, those officers are malleable to bribery whereby illegal activities could be safely concealed at any time. In the long run, this occurrence threatens the sake of the micro-community in particular and the general community as a whole. For example, the crime rate in Hong Kong was reportedly low during the 80s; nonetheless, inhabitants’ lives were still at risk due to malicious criminals. After an in-depth investigation from the Governmental Police Department, it was revealed that most police officers in this city were culprits of these offenders by receiving dirty money per illegitimate business. The final point is that if the police officers are native to an area, then their professional skills are not frequently mastered, which is a waste of training. In other words, the set of necessary abilities such as critical thinking, investigative analysis, resulting synthesis and any other abilities learned from the Police Academy could not be often employed, and eventually fall into oblivion. They are accustomed to the locale, so this would imperceptibly create a comfort zone which is hard to get out of.
In conclusion, the conception of accepting local police may appear impeccably good the first time, but it may trigger bad outcomes afterwards. I think the combination of native and non-native officers would be a balanced option for crime prevention in every single society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 87, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... recruitment should be carried out, for this types of police officers would firstly ...
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Line 2, column 378, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ticipate the crimes possibly committed. Thus the result could be of more successful ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, so, still, then, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion, in particular, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2356.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 446.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28251121076 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93760994224 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 176.041082164 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589686098655 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 758.7 506.74238477 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6523028683 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4736842105 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05263157895 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266131541564 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754887851658 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491577405985 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165443419811 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063252540822 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 78.4519038076 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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