WRITING: Some people think that good health is important to everyone, so medical services should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the disadvantages of private healthcare outweigh the advantages?
In contemporary society, it is irrefutable that good health is crucial for everyone. Therefore, some people hold the assumption that medical systems should not be run by profitable organizations. Nonetheless, it is my strong belief that private clinics serve an important function and thus should not be eliminated. The following essay will elucidate this viewpoint.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that there are some demerits of a privatized medical system. To embark on, treatment costs in self-operated healthcare services are more likely to be higher than state-owned ones, meaning that only the financially advantaged can afford this high-quality care, leaving those from lower classes only able to obtain second-rate healthcare. However, the poor tend to be more vulnerable to severe illness and hence have more demand for advanced care offered by this system, but unfortunately, financial hardships prevent them from enjoying this privilege. Furthermore, without the government’s supervision, several private hospitals may become dishonest. To illustrate, unnecessary tests are conducted to raise the cost of treatment, thereby making money for the owners’ benefits at the expense of innocent patients.
On the other hand, there are more merits of profit-yielding healthcare services. Firstly, private healthcare services share the responsibility with public hospitals in taking care of patients. This, as a result, helps to reduce the pressure put on state-owned healthcare institutions in terms of overload of patients, finance, or facilities which adversely affects the treatment process. A salient example is that amid the COVID-19 pandemic, many public hospitals in the US are overburdened with daily infected patients. Nevertheless, with many private hospitals available at the time, the patients still receive adequate treatment, and state-owned clinics can better concentrate on treating their patients rather tahn worrying about facility shortages. On top of that, the government also spends less money on treating patients, whereas the budget could be allocated to upgrade medical facilities or construct new infrastructure. Secondly, in order to make considerable profits and attract more customers, many private healthcare hospitals try their best to offer better medical services at a more affordable price. The customers, accordingly, greatly benefit from this stiff competition among many clinics.
By way of conclusion, while admitting some negative influence of profit-driven hospitals, I reaffirm my position that the merits are more significant, especially when considering the quality of care as well as its role in addressing several issues of a public healthcare system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, as a result, as well as, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2312.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79448621554 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1688456342 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609022556391 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 729.9 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.448648139 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.444444444 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8333333333 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214850170749 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692045514457 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669722862967 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136034372142 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761492317414 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 78.4519038076 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.