Social media enable people to keep in touch with each other and learn about news events Do advantages outweigh disadvantages

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Social media enable people to keep in touch with each other and learn about news events. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages.

Many people of the society think that social media has make people in touch with each other and they are makes them aware of news.i am to the view that internet has more advantages over disadvantages, because of its communication gap and learning abilities. I will discus in details.
It seems like that internet had taken world on storm by keeping everyone well known about each other, where as social media apps including whatsapp, telegram etc.which has removed communication gap between their loved ones by connecting them through technologies all these development had make every thing easy to people.For example, my best friend who went to South Africa for higher studies but when ever he makes a conference call to his mother both fell happy and his son fells home away from home. Social media enables every person to see their loved people who are miles away from them.
In addition, social media has also increased learning abilities of every learner around the glob through online platform like youtube and makes it easy for every pupil to take more advantage form this platform, which also allow them to learn from different touters through social media. For example, when i was preparing for my ielts exam youtube helps me a lot to get my desire band score, where i gain experience watching videos of different people related to my course of study. After preparing for almost 30 days i got succeed and passed my exam. Some times Learning from internet can be so useful for students.
In conclusion, many people believe that social media platforms keep people in update to each other and also know about fresh new as well. From my perspective advantages of social media outweighs disadvantages because it keep loved people together from overseas which helps them maintain their happiness. After all internet is blessings form people around the world.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...r and they are makes them aware of news.i am to the view that internet has more a...
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Line 2, column 103, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...g everyone well known about each other, where as social media apps including whatsapp, t...
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Line 2, column 219, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...d communication gap between their loved ones by connecting them through technologies...
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Line 2, column 268, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this development' or 'these developments'?
Suggestion: this development; these developments
...onnecting them through technologies all these development had make every thing easy to people.For...
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Line 2, column 290, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'made'.
Suggestion: made
... technologies all these development had make every thing easy to people.For example,...
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Line 2, column 322, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...ent had make every thing easy to people.For example, my best friend who went to So...
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Line 2, column 349, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sy to people.For example, my best friend who went to South Africa for higher stud...
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Line 2, column 565, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... every person to see their loved people who are miles away from them. In addition, soc...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[4]
Message: Did you mean 'from'?
Suggestion: from
... for every pupil to take more advantage form this platform, which also allow them to...
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Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...through social media. For example, when i was preparing for my ielts exam youtube...
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Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... lot to get my desire band score, where i gain experience watching videos of diff...
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Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...different people related to my course of study. After preparing for almost 30 day...
^^
Line 3, column 518, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...udy. After preparing for almost 30 days i got succeed and passed my exam. Some ti...
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Line 4, column 220, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'keeps'?
Suggestion: keeps
...edia outweighs disadvantages because it keep loved people together from overseas whi...
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Line 4, column 304, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ch helps them maintain their happiness. After all internet is blessings form people a...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, after all, for example, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97756410256 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44192700109 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.049422247 49.4020404114 269% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.181818182 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3636363636 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312346615533 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116980391513 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105976232875 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213444605267 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977538336125 0.056905535591 172% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...r and they are makes them aware of news.i am to the view that internet has more a...
^
Line 2, column 103, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...g everyone well known about each other, where as social media apps including whatsapp, t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 219, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...d communication gap between their loved ones by connecting them through technologies...
^^^^
Line 2, column 268, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this development' or 'these developments'?
Suggestion: this development; these developments
...onnecting them through technologies all these development had make every thing easy to people.For...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 290, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'made'.
Suggestion: made
... technologies all these development had make every thing easy to people.For example,...
^^^^
Line 2, column 322, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...ent had make every thing easy to people.For example, my best friend who went to So...
^^^
Line 2, column 349, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sy to people.For example, my best friend who went to South Africa for higher stud...
^^
Line 2, column 565, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... every person to see their loved people who are miles away from them. In addition, soc...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[4]
Message: Did you mean 'from'?
Suggestion: from
... for every pupil to take more advantage form this platform, which also allow them to...
^^^^
Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...through social media. For example, when i was preparing for my ielts exam youtube...
^
Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... lot to get my desire band score, where i gain experience watching videos of diff...
^
Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...different people related to my course of study. After preparing for almost 30 day...
^^
Line 3, column 518, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...udy. After preparing for almost 30 days i got succeed and passed my exam. Some ti...
^
Line 4, column 220, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'keeps'?
Suggestion: keeps
...edia outweighs disadvantages because it keep loved people together from overseas whi...
^^^^
Line 4, column 304, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ch helps them maintain their happiness. After all internet is blessings form people a...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, after all, for example, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97756410256 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44192700109 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.049422247 49.4020404114 269% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.181818182 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3636363636 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312346615533 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116980391513 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105976232875 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213444605267 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977538336125 0.056905535591 172% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.