Nowadays, many people cannot read or write. What problems does this cause? What measures can governments take to solve these problems?
With the alarming over-population, there are more and more disable people who cannot read or write. While this presents serious difficulties for individuals and society, there are steps that governments should take to deal with the problem.
It is undeniable that a person with a disability is disadvantageous in important ways. The first disadvantage that can be seen is learning difficulties. Clearly, if a person has a reading deficit or writing disorder, that one might get trouble with receiving information and reflecting ideas. Apart from that, learning is about receiving knowledge and presenting it. Therefore, lacking the reading and writing ability means that they hardly achieve comprehensive learning. As a result, these people have difficulty in finding jobs. Even if they have jobs, they might not be able to protect their rights as they cannot read official documents. Therefore, not only for himself but also for his family, and a large number of disabled people can be a burden for their community and nations as a whole.
However, there are some plans that government can apply to help illiterate people. Most importantly, governments need to ensure basic education for these people. They should make it easy for every disabled person to get the minimum literacy level. For example, resources should be allocated to provide basic literacy classes in local colleges or social and community centers to help people to learn to read and write. Moreover, creating a friendly and healthy environment for these people should be taken into consideration. For example, the government can encourage businesses to hire disabled staff or build communities only for these people in terms of entertainment and social activities. This helps illiterate people cope with the confusing mass of official paperwork. In this way, they will not be discriminated against, for instance by losing welfare rights to which they are entitled. As a result, these policies truly give the disables a better life.
In conclusion, although having learning difficulties cause many serious problems, governments still have solutions to tackle this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... people who cannot read or write. While this presents serious difficulties for indiv...
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Line 3, column 705, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...or himself but also for his family, and a large number of disabled people can be a burden for the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 1.00243902439 1397% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 965.302439024 188% => OK
No of words: 336.0 196.424390244 171% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39880952381 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9150384182 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 106.607317073 175% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556547619048 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 283.868780488 200% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.07073170732 560% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 8.94146341463 224% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8372575721 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.13902439024 790% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20872892189 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633528622056 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406853593765 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139762545603 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414026694529 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 40.7170731707 219% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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