When the tuition fee has a tendency to grow exorbitantly nowadays, it is argued that governments should pay for student's fee with ignorance of their financial status. In my perspective, i totally disagree with this statement, and this essay will explain my points.
Firstly, the freecharge education my forge the reduction of student's motivation of studying. Due to the fact that they do not have to pay any expenditure for the education, they are not under any financial burden, and then they will take it for granted. They are also not at the expense of failing examinations. Consequently, this situation will produce a generation of unqualified workforce.
Secondly, it may do harm to students. The workforce market is becoming more and more competitive, and in case everyone has their own bachelor's degree, they may find it difficult being distinct from the other competitors or making impression on the recruiters. The inflation of degree can not ensure their sense of security of getting hired in the future, which leads to higher rate of unemployment. In terms of governments, this will cause the shortage in their budgets while they have to spend more in unemployment benefits.
In conclusion, while waiving tuition seems to be a good idea, I still hold a believe that people should pay for their education in order to create higher standard of human resource.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09734513274 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94007820175 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601769911504 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6466862178 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.727272727 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185330469706 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594895655503 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482872120192 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102773313441 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349937388738 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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