The Internet has transformed the way information is shared and
consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.
What are the most serious problems associated with the Internet and
what solutions can you suggest?
It is true that with the invention of the Internet, accessing and spreading information have dramatically changed. Although several major problems have arisen as a result of these changes, some steps can be taken to deal with them.
One concern in terms of sharing data is that it has led to the violation of privacy. Today, the information is increasingly stored digitally rather than physically, which results in users’ emails and bank accounts falling into the hands of criminals. This issue usually happens when unreliable passwords are set and websites vulnerable to hacking entered. Although it is impossible to prevent all identity thefts, online users can take some precautions. For example, they can make their passwords more complex, use VPN to hide personal information and log into trustworthy websites. These simple actions should protect their private data from cybercriminals.
Regarding the consumption of information, one pressing problem is the ease with which children can access potentially dangerous sites. Take an example of pornography websites. Despite imposing age restrictions, they can easily be accessible to youngsters who register with the site with one click and claim to be an adult. Research has shown that children who consume such unsuitable content frequently have increased levels of self-objectification and sexual violence, which undoubtedly harm their
psychological development. To mitigate such exposure to explicit content, governments should ensure that adequate legislations and controls are in place that will prevent young people from accessing dangerous sites. In other words, they
ought to require more than simply confirming that they are adults to
view the site.
In conclusion, two of the main information-related issues that the
Internet age has created are the vulnerability of personal data and easy
access to dangerous sites. However, with the right actions
by governments and individuals, it could be made a safe place for
everyone.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-06-18 | bassmodulators123 | 89 | view |
| 2024-03-09 | thaokim2003 | 78 | view |
| 2023-09-19 | Chau Anaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaâ | 78 | view |
| 2023-06-18 | aNa123 | 89 | view |
| 2023-05-18 | rumpul4skin | 73 | view |
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Comments
8.5 was given for this essay…
8.5 was given for this essay by Mike Wattie (examiner). The site is working wrongly!
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t adequate legislations and controls are in place that will prevent young people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63157894737 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1243558893 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611842105263 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6876405545 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137215898402 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422249960997 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431749764851 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0547182588629 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530413333445 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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