Computers are being used more and more in education.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion
The usage of the computers has been increasing in all aspects of our daily life specially in educational purposes, in the process of teaching and learning. Although it makes getting knowledge much easier and has some merits, it has always brought about some drawbacks.
In my opinion, I believe that making use of electronic devices is overwhelmingly beneficial for students.
Computers have become an essential tool in the field of educating as it has some merits.
By computers and laptops, geographical boundaries have been broken due to the fact that students have freedom to focus on what the want related to the study or a new thing through the internet only by searching. Besides, educators can access to the various available online courses which they are interested in. Furthermore, with making use of computers with visual clips and audios to teach pupils is much more effective rather than sticking on only teaching on old ways. As a result, even slow learners comprehend the difficult lessons, thereby they excel in their studies and benefit largely.
However, using of computers has Brough about some fundamental problems which are important to be considered. Excessive use of these electronic devices may affect some concerns about health . People who always work with these devices suffer from eye strains as well as headaches. Moreover, children usually do overuse of computer in non-academic fields game and I causes obesity which avoid them playing games physically. Apart from having physical problems, it has negative impact on their mind since they become less sociable by only playing with their computers solitary. Although using these tool has become to the widespread use, in some areas it is not affordable for some students who are living in deprived as they are belong to the lower income group of the society. As a consequent, it makes a great gap between the student from different part of the society.
To my perspective, utilizing of computers in educating is definitely important and has a indispensable role in pedagogy. As an illustration, as a means learning, it will be practical if students search the answer of their questions through the internet which will improve their knowledge without participating a class in person. Although using uncontrollably may creates numerous health problems.
To sum up, technology, computer to be exact, has enhanced the educating at schools or alone.
Contrary to having advantages which is preparing a huge diversity of data conveniently it has some drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, apart from, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2142.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8735565926 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561274509804 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7965010497 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.1 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181291662 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527446589422 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418688216708 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084143237531 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268662489955 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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