The chart below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relavant

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The chart below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relavant

The pie chart depicts the proportion of water used for various purposes(Industrial, Agricultural,
Domestic) in North America, South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia, and Southeast Asia.
Overall, Agriculture uses the most amount of water in many counties, and the usage of water for domestic
use is comparatively less in those countries.

Firstly, Agriculture in South East Asia, Central Asia, Africa uses more than two-thirds of water( 81%, 88%, and 84% ).
Moreover, usage of water by domestic and industrial is very less. Only 7% and 12% are used for domestic and industrial purposes in South East Asia.
However, it goes worse in Central Asia and Africa with only 7% and 9% in domestic use, 5% and 7% for industries.

However, few countries use less water for agriculture when compared to the countries mentioned above. In South America, agriculture uses 71% of water, 19% of the water used for domestic purposes, and the rest for industrial purposes. However, the proportion of people using water for agriculture is drastically low with just 10% and 48% in South America and North America. In South America, Industries use 19%, and 10% goes to domestic use.
In NA, 48% is used by industries, and 39% is for domestic use.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 115, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...an two-thirds of water 81%, 88%, and 84% . Moreover, usage of water by domestic a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, moreover, so, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12315270936 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89012890017 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472906403941 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.482926829268 1242% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6646954945 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5454545455 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 3.83414634146 235% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169938571378 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936663305387 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342163213815 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928568534985 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502505326738 0.0819641961636 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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