some people say that now is the best time in history to be living.
What is your opinion about this?
What other time in history would be interesting to live in?
There is a school of thought who believes that we are living in the finniest era of the history. I agree with this opinion because of the facilities available in today's world. If I had to choose another time for me from this history, I would opt for living in 1950 because of few reasons that will be elaborated below.
A group of people consider the current time as the best. There are several reasons for this ideology, the main reason is the advancement in the technology. World is considered as a global village because of the convenience in communication. It was never that easy to travel across the globe than it is today. With the availability of easy and fast commute within city, it is feasible for many people to earn their living in most efficient way. Similarly, it is argued that we have all relaxing facilities available for our free time that includes spa, warm water in the winters. We have heating and cooling systems available with respect to the weather conditions. We have all the information available on a click because of internet.
I agree with this ideology of living in the best times of history. It is mainly due to advancement of technology. I believe that science has helped us to improve our way of living in several ways. For instance, there are more medical treatments are available for diseases which were considered incurable in the history. We can communicate with our loved ones across the globe over audio and video calls, this was considered impossible in the history. Economic situation of people is quite better because of several employment opportunities available in the world. The buying power has increased significantly compared with what it was a hundred years ago.
Another time which I suppose was great time to live was in 1950s and 1960s. It was good time because this was an era of development and industrialization when a lot opportunities were created. After the deadly world wars, people were trying to build a better world for their generation to come. Moreover, I believe that was an era of simplicity, cooperation, and innovation. Space scientists were targeting to approach moon, which they succeeded as well. Researchers were working together innovate things like internet to improve ways of living. Further, we saw several counties, who were enemies to each other, taking positive turn to work together for better future.
In the conclusion, I would say that a portion of human population believe that we are living in the best time of history. I go along with this ideology because of facilities available to us at current times which not imaginable in the past. The second-best time would have been in 1950 and 1960s, because of the positive developments of that era.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1950s'.
Suggestion: in the 1950s
...ch I suppose was great time to live was in 1950s and 1960s. It was good time because thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, similarly, so, well, for instance, i suppose, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 41.998997996 174% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2277.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 465.0 315.596192385 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89677419355 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78829789597 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47311827957 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 742.5 506.74238477 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 5.43587174349 313% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2264236264 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.3214285714 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6071428571 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.96428571429 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212001571531 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614171952158 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703832632881 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141319572274 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516481260381 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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