important subject such as reading writing mathematics were lost.when it comes to computers some people think that computer skills should be added to the list as the fourth skill. To what extend do you agree?
Many people think that essential subject such as reading writing and mathematics are lost but when it comes to computer scope, many other believe that computing should be added as skill learning process. I strongly agree that computer must be added to the list because it will help people getting jobs in future and also doing online working. I will discus it in details.
When it comes to learn computer skills nowadays it is very much important for every person to learn all the skills, because it helps every individual around the glob to get jobs in higher paid companies as well as permanent jobs in high class companies. For example, people in uk get paid doubled who know IT department skills such as cyber security, computer billing , softwere development and website developers as compered to engineers and many other skills, moreover it is also stayed that PC workers also get job very easily in comparison to other skill workers. Learning computer skills can also help people to get their dream jobs and salaries.
In addition people who mastered IT are living more happier than those who were dealing in physical shops because these days almost half of the business are getting online and securing their future in terms of working online, because every one of third person is ordering what they need from online markets and saving their valuable time more to add to find ways of making money these days you need to have a laptop and some skills to creat shop online on many websites like Amazon and many other platforms. Learning skill is fun these days.
In conclusion, mastering IT computer skill not only helps in getting good job but also takes people forward to make some new opportunities for them self in setting online work. I my opinion every student must learn computer skills because upcoming future is connected to it. Mastering different skills can change life’s.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...athematics are lost but when it comes to computer scope, many other believe that ...
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Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to process'
Suggestion: to process
...uting should be added as skill learning process. I strongly agree that computer must be...
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Line 2, column 367, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...such as cyber security, computer billing , softwere development and website develo...
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Line 3, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...get their dream jobs and salaries. In addition people who mastered IT are living more ...
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Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...s. In addition people who mastered IT are living more happier than those who were...
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Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...ition people who mastered IT are living more happier than those who were dealing in physical...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on, mastering IT computer skill not only helps in getting good job but also takes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, third, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87888198758 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3238300175 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546583850932 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.977480496 49.4020404114 279% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.818181818 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2727272727 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344820332621 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142052009518 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118910365903 0.0667982634062 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228262318333 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145341604543 0.056905535591 255% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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