There is a good deal of evidence that increasing car use is contributing to global warming and having other undesirable effects on people’s health and well-being.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
he car use has become a hot topic for debate in recent years. It is proved that increasing car use is contributing to global warming and have other negative affects on people's health and environmental.
I truly believe that a good method to discourage people from using their cars would be to increse dramatically the price for fuel. In this way, fewer people will use their cars and people may find more convenient to walk instead of driving a car, especially for short distances. On the other hand, many people would consider illegal to increase the price for fuel without any reasons, thus protesting and blaming the Government.
Another good method would be to award people that choose alternative transporting ways like riding a bike or walking. For example employers could increase employee's wage if they do not drice a car by traveling at work. This approach would be a good motivation for those who think that driving a car is a quicker method of arriving at work. However, this practice could lead to serious misunderstandings and problems between employers and other employees, that find it more convenient to use a car.
An excellent idea is to implement a school reform, which consists in encouraging teachers to explain with examples how important it is to take care of the environmental and how bad it is for health and nature to use cars. In addition, teachers can teach their students about global warming and its negative effects. I think that every significant change comes from education, and only by awaring younger generation of what is wrong and what is right, we can create a great future for our planet.
To conclude, I can clearly say that there are many methods to discourage peoplefrom using their cars, but we should opt for big changes that come only with mentality changes
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
he car use has become a hot topic for deba...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, thus, for example, i think, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88636363636 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72268282599 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7889402135 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.769230769 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274295255296 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105656354298 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810470553105 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155990594063 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863888919679 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.