Some people believe that using a bicycle as your main form of transport has a lot of advantages, whereas others think that it has many disadvantages.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Riding a bicycle as the primary transportation is believed has substantial advantages by several people, whilst others argue otherwise. I totally agree that improving health is the benefits of cycling even though it takes time to arrive in the destination.
On the one hand, people who commuting uses a cycle are able to practice their breathing that important for human health. This is because oxygen needs in the body will be fulfilled by riding a bike in which it is crucial for human internal organs such as immune system that help people to stay healthy. The biker need to move their feet constantly up and down; Simultaneously, the needs of oxygen will increase because the heart pumps faster, so that people who rides regularly become more healthy compared to not. For instance, Japanese citizens use a bicycle everyday as their main transportation, while at the same time they are also recognized as the healthiest resident in the world. However, while it has benefits, riding a bike takes a long time.
On the other hand, every now and then, riding a bike need much time because of limited speed that often make the rider came late. This is because the bike uses manual power by human energy while at some point human will be getting tired. Furthermore, people who is living in a highland are not suitable for cycling in which it will be more burdening. Take a highlander in Indonesia as an example, mostly the villagers ride the motorcycle or car as their main transportation so that they can arrive on time. However, this idea cannot be compared to human basic needs that is to be healthy. Meanwhile, in some reason biking is cheaper in among other transportations by which people do not spend their money for fuel.
To sum up, several people think that biking has lot of advantages, which is I totally believed, such keeping people to be healthy, whereas other argue that it is often make individuals come late due to manual energy that has a limit and sometimes over burned the highlander. Where possible, the government can encourage the company to make a sophisticated bicycle that suitable for highlander.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 561, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...stance, Japanese citizens use a bicycle everyday as their main transportation, while at ...
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Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...akes a long time. On the other hand, every now and then, riding a bike need much time because o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, so, then, whereas, while, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87603305785 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70058174955 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517906336088 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7903752912 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136644727004 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496470797631 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467265218804 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951282090992 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019738708006 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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