Some people think that the best way to be successful in life is to get a university education. Others disagree and say that nowadays this is no longer true.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
opinion is divided as to where one should attain higher education after high school or not so as to succeed in life. Although education can benefit a student in finding a decent job, it is certainly not the only way leading to success.
the proponents of the former view often indicate that a university degree equals a well-paid job which plays an insurance role in having a successful life. Such idea is predicated on the fact that a major portion of today’s employment can be found in service sector, where, for example, working at a bank or a hotel necessitates a degree in business or hospitality. Therefore, should one unable to study at higher levels, their chances of being qualified for such positions will likely be reduced. And this could deprive a person of abilities to provide for a family or possess certain valuable properties, such as private domiciles or automobiles, which are often indicative of a successful and happy man.
However, Despite the initial advantage one may gain when entering the job market, attending university is not always the best option. It is readily apparent that many new graduates are struggling to seek for a job that can at least help them become self-sufficient. Such phenomenon exists mainly due to not only the lack of practical experiences that could be only accumulated outside the campus, but also the essential life skills and qualities, such as persuasion, negotiation and self-study ability, which could usually be honed via real-life struggles. Consequently, were university the only way to success, many among us, especially the disadvantaged, would never be able to graduate from poverty and amass great wealth. Meanwhile, in fact there are many examples of those who have successfully attained great achievements or supreme accolade because of their determination, in spite of the absence of tertiary education. For example, Rihanna who did not go to university has obtained many prestigious musical awards out of her perseverance.
in conclusion, even though being able to graduate from a university plays an important role in a person’ career path, it is certainly not the only choice for everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Opinion
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...gher education after high school or not so as to succeed in life. Although education can...
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Suggestion: In
...ical awards out of her perseverance. in conclusion, even though being able to g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, as to, at least, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16430594901 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98367398136 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597733711048 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.8331296991 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.230769231 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1538461538 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147823914334 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533531436779 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306973941343 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909788843813 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284293120204 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Opinion
opinion is divided as to where one should attai...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...gher education after high school or not so as to succeed in life. Although education can...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...not the only way leading to success. the proponents of the former view often ind...
^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...ical awards out of her perseverance. in conclusion, even though being able to g...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, as to, at least, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16430594901 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98367398136 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597733711048 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.8331296991 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.230769231 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1538461538 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147823914334 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533531436779 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306973941343 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909788843813 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284293120204 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.