The majority of news is bad news such as wars, famines, accidents and crimes. Why do you think that is? Do you think the news should be a balance of both good and bad news?
In recent years, it has been argued that people have been overwhelmed by bad news. While I find some possible reasons leading to the crisis of that news, I strongly agree that residents should learn how to create a balance between positive and negative news.
There is no denying that there are various reasons why bad news is occupied on a large scale nowadays, one of which is associated with a sense of curiosity. According to a psychological experiment in the United States, each individual is more likely to choose what they prefer, regardless of the advantages or drawbacks of their choices. Without a doubt, some inhabitants always complain about hearing bad news too much, as they tend to ignore the others and get bad news such as violence or famines instead. In addition, media producers are able to take advantage of innocent citizens’ curiosity to gain more benefits, which results in thrilling news on social media regularly.
I personally believe that each member of the community should maintain the balance of both good and bad news, particularly by keeping their emotions neutral when getting a piece of news. It is said that people cannot change their situation or environment, except for their attitude. Moreover, news, whether it is good or bad, plays a key role as a means of recreation or knowledge. In other words, the news serves human needs, and people have the right to choose the balance. If they could keep them under control, they could have opportunities to learn sympathies towards those who are less fortunate when getting bad news or express motivating feelings when getting good news, which makes them become more humane and have a clear aim in life.
In conclusion, despite a range of reasons for overloading bad news in society, I realize that each person could remain balanced towards them by getting both good and bad ones and keeping their minds fresh and neutral.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, while, except for, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92857142857 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5938222107 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568322981366 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.0238501857 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.25 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362872497031 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147352440789 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873739329462 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236260130956 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274788497331 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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