The shortage of housing in big cities can cause severe consequences. Only government action can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is irrefutable fact the housing is major problem is cities. Whilst some opine that this situation causes many other results. In addition, politicians only could take measures to get rid of the phenomenon. Personally, I also concur the same and the hypotheses scrutinized further.
The foremost reason is that authority has a power to change the scenario. They could plan proper structure around the cities to increase housing ; whereas, individuals cannot execute the plan if they try to made. For example, at the edge of the city more housing facilities could be made by the help of government since they have all the resources. Additionally, those who are in power could make the phenomenon reversable owing to providing job as well as education facility to rural area where people got opportunity and cannot look forward to opt other city. Another point worth mentioning is that government could make more high-rise building for populace. So, people can purchase it. However, contractor and architectures has not enough funds to build such a skyscraper because expense of land, labour and material is quite high, nowadays, particularly in city.
Moreover, if authority provide loan with a low interest to those who not own home because many of are not have financial stability, then the negative development would not be the case. Thus, it is clear that authority has all the funds and power to overcome the situation.
To conclude, I reaffirm my position is political member could extend the boundary for housing and providing facilities to rural population and providing funds to public could solve the issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 544, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to opting'.
Suggestion: to opting
...got opportunity and cannot look forward to opt other city. Another point worth mention...
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Line 4, column 868, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e high, nowadays, particularly in city. Moreover, if authority provide loan with...
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Line 6, column 107, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...ho not own home because many of are not have financial stability, then the negative ...
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Line 6, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ity, then the negative development would not be the case. Thus, it is clear that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, thus, well, whereas, for example, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18939393939 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77226255218 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617424242424 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9473148669 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8571428571 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103675791628 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368744154276 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376939137788 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0562027273516 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388806591655 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.