Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.
It is commonly argued that overcrowding in big cities leads to many issues. Although it results in severe traffic congestion, improving the public transportation system could mitigate it.
The excess number of people living in the city center leads to worse traffic conditions, impacting one’s quality of life. As the more people are, the higher mobility occurs, increasing vehicle volume on the road. Thus, it takes longer time for people to travel. According to a survey done by the University of Indonesia in 2012, around 20% of 1000 Jakarta workers experienced severe fatigue after spending more than 4 hours on the road to work at Karawang. The statistic showed more than 200.000 people from East Java migrated in the last couple of decades, creating the rise of vehicle volume in the protocol street by up to 10% per year. Thus, overcrowding impacted the life quality of Jakarta workers.
However, overcrowding in big cities can be solved by improving the quality of the public transportation system, decreasing the volume of vehicles on the road. When the transportation system is convenient, it would be preferable for people to use it more as they do not need to drive and can rest during the trips. For instance, a study done by New York University in 2009 revealed a 20% decrease in the vehicle volume in Brooklyn after an added bus fleed happened in 2005. Although the population of Brooklyn had been recorded a rise by 10% at that time, it did not create worse traffic congestion. Thus, having a well-established transportation fleet is necessary to tackle traffic issues.
To conclude, overcrowding in metropolitan areas can be tackled by providing a well-established transportation system despite creating worse traffic jams. Hence, more government budget allocation is a necessary step to start with.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...be preferable for people to use it more as they do not need to drive and can rest ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, thus, well, for instance, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16161616162 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00286493063 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548821548822 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.725609074 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.2 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0498733859486 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0177529813782 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0253977979732 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0355455580504 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335055322669 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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