Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening? What measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
In this day and age, crime is more serious day by day, many criminals commit more offenses after receiving punishment from their first crime. In this essay, I am going to explain the reasons for this problem and give a solution to tackle this.
There are two main reasons why people seem to act illegally and reoffend. Firstly, education plays a crucial role in how people act when they grow up, if they are not educated well, it is easy for them to offend over and over again. For example, if a child is born and raised in a violent family, he or she can bully mates in school or be a murder. Another reason for this is that when people commit a crime, their crime will be recorded so that it is hard for them to seek jobs after being in prison. As a result, they will turn to illegal acts to generate income.
There are many solutions which can be done by the government in order to reduce crime rate, especially the legislations. Many criminals engage in crimes again because the law is not strict enough. Therefore, the government can make the laws stricter to deter offenders and reduce the crime level. For example, the punishment for murderers was about ten years in prison; however, it is increased to from more than fifteen years to be served a penalty death recently.
Taking everything into consideration, prospective criminals tend to commit crimes again and more seriously. However, personally, I think the council can impose/introduce stricter laws in order to reduce the crime level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71212121212 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55593980423 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564393939394 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0059166128 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6923076923 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352702264809 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110540753099 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836826221533 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20825589136 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106758343049 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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