Many processed foods and ready-made meals contain preservatives and chemicals.
Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
the development of food chemistry has enabled us to process and store foods for much longer than we could. Even though such scientific advancement can help meet nutritional demand and keep prices stable, preservatives and food additives could be healthily detrimental.
Such preserving substances can help prolong the life span of foods before reaching customers. In today’s world, there is an increasing number of those who cannot grow vegetables or even cook for themselves due to the hectic pace of life, especially in urban areas and thus packaged foods are by and large their primary source of nourishment. Without preservatives, many of them would, therefore, decay before being consumed, thus effecting a shortage of food, essential day-to-day products, and even worse, inflating food prices unreasonably. Although being harmful to the well-being of consumers to a certain extent, such chemicals are usually under close monitor of governmental food safety regulations.
However, health problems stemming from food additives have raised concerns over the safety of users, especially the young. Such issues are prevalent in developing countries, such as Vietnam where the government cannot have sufficient resources to properly monitor the origin of substances added to foods. Furthermore, many tiny food establishments do not adhere closely to the governments’ directives on what kind of additives are safe to use. In combination, were there no severe restrictions on the usage of such chemicals in food production, a greater number of buyers would be prone to diseases, ranging from minor to fatal ones such as diarrhea and cancer. Consequently, despite the convenience of such preserving chemicals, some of them are carcinogenic and ought to be replaced by organic alternatives.
in conclusion, in spite of the benefits of ready-made foods predominately related to the ease of storage and low prices, it is imperative to invent new preservation methods to protect consumers’ health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, kind of, such as, by and large, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56209150327 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13863667828 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643790849673 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.9533709031 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.833333333 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175432093442 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06580439234 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376756873422 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111679277148 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0142272210633 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.