Nowadays people have cosmetic surgery to improve life. Why do many more people choose these operations? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Today, people have face-lift to improve life. This essay will examine both sides of the argument before a conk is drawn.
Admittedly, there are some argument in favor of people have cosmetic surgery to improve life. First, people believe their face is the most important things in society that beautiful people are valued regardless of talent or skills. This beautiful support, presumably tends not only miss in beauty content reach the world but also face-lift to mitigate their feeling of inferiority, which eventually promotes an egalitarian society. Second, cosmetic surgery would probably result more money for doctors and government, because people want face-lift need bigger money.In fact, it is acknowledged that have beautiful face help people are confidence, it is also said that changing face feng shui helps that person economic growth if change this part.
Nevertheless, the resultant problem would be far more significant than the minor benefits once people have face-lift. First, if people cosmetic surgery would likely correspond with a tremendous health strain on internal organs and the stability of health. Change body part or face part, people could have difficult to move or difficult eat for a long time, meaning that people affected after surgery. Second, cosmetic surgery would tempt many young people including those who are not know face-lift consequence or people want beautiful face, thereby great burdens for their healthcare system and severe sequelae and potentially wasting time that these young people could have spent pursuing time more suitable career paths. It, instead, would be a more cosmetic surgery viable option if the change were focused on supporting less privileged in terms of body since childhood or deformed face.
This essay above discussed both view positive and negative of both view. In my perspective, people have cosmetic surgery to improve life have demerits overshadow merits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43189368771 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49844931544 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.0195670954 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.769230769 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307878133202 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136772322463 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841630932598 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213182481208 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346990693341 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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